I'm Just A Girl Who's Thirteen

Don't ask too much of me,

When I only have this much to give.

Don't push me too hard,

When I'm about to break.

Don't judge,

When you don't understand the pain I'm feeling.

I always try my hardest,

But you still want more from me.

I'm not a machine, that runs none stop.

I'm just a girl who's thirteen.

I need a break too.

Reviews

[Effie]

I like how you expressed your feelings. "I need a break too." I think as adults (so we call ourselves) :) we don't always realize teens have a lot of pressure and yes you need a break too.
This is a very good write and I love it! I love the way you are strong in your words and firm in who you are. Another writing well done! Keep up the good work.

[Fluffyy]

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you like it :)

[Anjali]

I like this... Loved the way you conveyed your emotions... Very nice. Keep up the good work!

[Fluffyy]

Thank you so much for taking your time to read my writings!!!! I love your reviews :)

[Anjali]

Haha! No problem... Your writings are very good, I enjoy reading them.