Perfection

This is about the first girl I ever had a crush on.

Admiring from afar,

She is beauty at its best.

Her snow white skin,

And pale blonde hair,

Truly, she is like no other.

Eyes shining with diamonds,

No mortal is worthy of her touch.

Those soft, pink lips should never have to frown.

I remember every word she spoke to me,

Every fleeting glance.

I hold forever the image of an angel in my head.

If only those delicate hands would graze my ugly fingers.

No use to hope,

As these dreams will never be reality.

Oh, how I wish she were mine!

The girl who puts perfection to shame.

Author's Note

Please be honest in your reviews. =)

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

i like this one alot the imagery in done well.... overall nice job on this one!!! fav lines...I hold forever the image of an angel in my head.

If only those delicate hands would graze my ugly fingers.

No use to hope,

As these dreams will never be reality.

Oh, how I wish she were mine!........................... very nice!!!

The girl who puts perfection to shame.

[Sincerely, Alex]

Quant, cute, adorable.

Beautiful write my love.

Alex

[Aekmy]

This is so sweet! You did an excellent job painting a picture of this gorgeous girl for us. (:

-Mary
The Only Exception

[Justina]

i get a very pure and ellegant image in my head. i'm stuck on the angel bit. very good piece

[Lunar Lightning]

This is very good, clear emotions and a very good choice in words. A very pleasing peice to read.

Luna