She is thinking About

She is thinking About

A Poem by Cristy
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Building a relationship with self

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She is thinking about.....
Smiles The color yellow
Deep profound earthy brown

Deeply rooted in profoundness of her consciousness
She becomes the yellow flower
Blossoming into fruition of Smiling presence rooted in the earth

© 2020 Cristy


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This one is deceptively simple on the surface. The first verse seems to be a type of stream of consciousness technique that allows us to see the speaker's thought processes as they succeed one another. Verse two is an apparent explanation of its predecessor. What we are witnessing, then, is a metamorphosis, a growth or blossoming of the compete individual as self acceptance finally prevails. An interesting psychological piece here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cristy

7 Years Ago

John the Baptist, your review was a beautiful write in itself.



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This one is deceptively simple on the surface. The first verse seems to be a type of stream of consciousness technique that allows us to see the speaker's thought processes as they succeed one another. Verse two is an apparent explanation of its predecessor. What we are witnessing, then, is a metamorphosis, a growth or blossoming of the compete individual as self acceptance finally prevails. An interesting psychological piece here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cristy

7 Years Ago

John the Baptist, your review was a beautiful write in itself.

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Added on September 2, 2017
Last Updated on October 24, 2020
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