Her Word

Her Word

A Poem by Dominik D. Rites
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Finding beauty in even the darkest places, mending the wounds of promises that couldn't be kept.

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Tubes in her arms kept her alive;
wound around her bed,
entangled the room with cold death,
trapping the sunshine.

He held her small, delicate, hand,
bluebells in his eyes,
a stuffed elephant in his lap,
slouched forward, mourning.

She had not lived to keep her word--
Heaven took her then.
Daisies lined her body interred,
gathering the sun.

© 2022 Dominik D. Rites


Author's Note

Dominik D. Rites
I wasn't sure whether to add an additional quatrain. I felt that the final line was a good place to end the poem.

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Added on September 18, 2022
Last Updated on September 18, 2022
Tags: poem, poetry, loss, death, grief, short, love, sunshine

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Dominik D. Rites
Dominik D. Rites

Montreal, Quebec, Canada



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I'm an English Literature major looking to share some of my work with the world and gain a bit of experience. I enjoy poetry, fiction, horror, drama, tragedy, essays, and many other genres. I'm hoping.. more..

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