The Unwanted Friend

The Unwanted Friend

A Poem by Dominik D. Rites
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Being unwanted isn't exactly a new thing for me.

"
Your feet scathed the ground
as you came swinging down,
your skirt caught in the wind
- unaware of what I was in.

Shock is a strange emotion,
one that gives you the notion
that the world is sitting still
and that notion is hard to kill.

Sadness fills my tiny heart
as I wait for my turn to start,
but as the clouds close, I wait.
It's beginning to get a bit late.

I wonder if you have forgotten
- or perhaps my mind is rotten.
The door opens and you prance,
clumsily celebrating in dance.

I follow behind with a frown
and let my head hang down.
I bump you from right behind
and watch as you turn to find

that I have been all alone
- and to that, I felt prone.
Waiting, I was, to play,
and to that, you say,

"We didn't want to play with you anyway."

© 2021 Dominik D. Rites


Author's Note

Dominik D. Rites
Having friends that purposefully exclude you is worse than not having friends at all.

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Agreed. That can be seen as a type of bullying and is by all rights disingenuous and abusive. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


You're better off without them.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Added on August 29, 2021
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Tags: poem, poetry, sad poetry, childhood poetry, childhood, trauma, friends, toxicity, loneliness, lonely, alone

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Dominik D. Rites
Dominik D. Rites

Montreal, Quebec, Canada



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I'm an English Literature major looking to share some of my work with the world and gain a bit of experience. I enjoy poetry, fiction, horror, drama, tragedy, essays, and many other genres. I'm hoping.. more..

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