Painfully, Permanently

Painfully, Permanently

A Poem by Dominik D. Rites
"

I think about you all the time.

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Everything you left,
is everything I am.
All that I touch,
reminds me of you.
Your grey jacket,
around my arms,
packed in my heart,
and loose against,
a dining chair.

Your curly hair,
so full of life,
so full of you,
is entangled in,
my wavy streaks,
of auburn locks.
The scars you made,
on my fragile body,
are still red,
still bleeding,

and painfully,
permanently,
there.

© 2018 Dominik D. Rites


Author's Note

Dominik D. Rites
Still thinking of the friends I've lost...

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I can get the sense of the situation and see it in my mind, the images are so clear. It’s beautiful in a melancholy way.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great job on this poem. i don't know what exactly inspired this, but i felt myself retreating to a place where i felt lost. i feel connected to you in a way because of your writing, though.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, impacting, powerful and speaks volumes to me. The brutality of bad love

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 1, 2018
Last Updated on July 1, 2018
Tags: love, passion, sad, dark, deep, loss, pain, longing, burden, depression, depressing

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Dominik D. Rites
Dominik D. Rites

Montreal, Quebec, Canada



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I'm an English Literature major looking to share some of my work with the world and gain a bit of experience. I enjoy poetry, fiction, horror, drama, tragedy, essays, and many other genres. I'm hoping.. more..

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