Crazily In Love With You

I'm going crazy for you.

My mind,

which was once empty,

once clear,

is filled with subliminal,

and vague,

scattered messages.

I don’t know what to do.

Your eyes,

reflect my every desire.

Warmth,

touches my delicate skin,

pale,

and so bitter cold.

I’m holding your photograph,

thinking of you,

your lips parting in words,

sweet,

as I shy mine into a line.

I’m shy,

and my heart opens.

I want to give it to you,

my firefly,

who glows in the palm of my hand.

My ship,

that is always there to carry me.

My flower field,

hugging my body as I greet the sky.

I go crazy when you break,

every tear,

forming cracks along your face,

hurts me,

more than I could ever take.

I want to kiss every tear,

very tenderly,

and stop all of your pain.

My love,

I want your hands in mine,

Your voice,

in my ears.

Your skin,

beneath my fingers.

I’m so terribly,

crazily,

in love with you.

Author's Note

I remember finding someone who made me feel this way and now I'm no longer in love with them since it's been years since the last time we spoke, but the feeling still feels fresh in my mind. Perhaps, if they were to ever enter my life again, I may just fall in love with them all over again.

Reviews

[Haley]

you have a beautiful way with words, especially in this poem. i couldn't help but smile after i read this.

[Bacchus]

Not sure about the pulling at your dark curls line. Like he bit about the tears though. Maybe rewrite

[Dominik D. Rites]

Thank you for the suggestion. I also thought that it was a little weird, looking back at it, but thanks to this I was able to think of something that fit way better (: