It Came

It Came

A Poem by Dominik D. Rites
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I never thought you would do it.

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You were a pile of broken bones,
desperately crying for someone,
anyone,
to put you back together.

You were a fly caught in a web,
trying to flee the black widow,
trying,
but she came one night.

You were a ghost in a window,
screaming for those inside to see,
hear,
but you were long gone.

You were a torn up photograph,
waiting for someone to repair you,
waiting,
but you were beyond repair.

I was a farmer with the tools,
to revive your field of hopeless death,
yet,
I planted more and more.

No matter what I did to help,
it was never enough to save you.
Never.
I never thought you would do it,

but you threw away your bones,
let the black widow come,
broke through the window,
and set your image aflame.

Death is a calling,
and it came.

© 2018 Dominik D. Rites


Author's Note

Dominik D. Rites
I recently began experiencing things that reminded me of a very painful past, but I'm now getting back on my feet and wrote this as a way of accepting everything that's happened. Hopefully I will be able to move on. Any thoughts?

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Your poem is quite dark, I got the impression of someone desperately trying to help another, without success. Hopefully you have turned the page now and can move forward.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 11, 2018
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Tags: dark, death, poetry, poem, morbid, loss, guilt, remorse, metaphors, desperation, struggle

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Dominik D. Rites
Dominik D. Rites

Montreal, Quebec, Canada



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I'm an English Literature major looking to share some of my work with the world and gain a bit of experience. I enjoy poetry, fiction, horror, drama, tragedy, essays, and many other genres. I'm hoping.. more..

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