Desert Stars

Desert Stars

A Poem by Dominik D. Rites
"

I lay down in the dust and open my eyes to read the desert stars.

"
I walked amongst the dust,
Heaving dangerous gusts,
Smelling scents of rust,
And feeling a thirsty lust.

"Water, water, shelter..."

I find the horizon,
Trace it with my eyes,
Thinking of all of the ways,
I could possibly die.

"Thirst, hunger, exhaustion, asphyxiation..."

I find the sand,
Warm yet cooling in the night.
I hold out my hand,
Like Superman taking flight.

"Fly, go, soar, escape..."

I find the desert wind,
Picking up and tearing at my clothes,
My knees too skinned,
To walk through this desert that I loathe.

"Keep going, live, thrive, be strong..."

I find my feet buried in grain,
My hand to shield my eyes from the world,
And though I am in so much pain,
I let my hand uncurl.

"Look, see, know, remember..."

I find you there,
Beyond the storm,
Your winding hair,
Behind your feminine form.

"It's okay. You're okay. Fly away..."

I lay down in the dust,
And open my eyes to read the desert stars,
And let my world adjust,
To the things I can only see from afar.

"Good night."

I see a reservoir.

© 2018 Dominik D. Rites


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Dominik D. Rites
I wrote this on a whim and ended up liking it a lot. What do you think?

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You did such a beautiful job of telling a story that flows together so nicely.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on March 24, 2018
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Tags: hope, struggle, fictional, desperate, desperation, thirst, hunger, desert, pain, death, inspirational

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Dominik D. Rites
Dominik D. Rites

Montreal, Quebec, Canada



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I'm an English Literature major looking to share some of my work with the world and gain a bit of experience. I enjoy poetry, fiction, horror, drama, tragedy, essays, and many other genres. I'm hoping.. more..

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