If I had you, I could have 10 better than you.

If I had you, I could have 10 better than you.

A Poem by Flo
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for somebody. They know who they are.

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If you thought you are the best thing in my life,

think again.

 

If you were lost when I was around,

You're always going to be lost when I'm not there.

 

If you finally find yourself after a while,

You won't find me beside you anymore.

 

If you are a chaotic soul when you were with me,

You're the apocalypse when I'm gone.

 

If you thought that everything will get better for you,

You're actions will proove you wrong.

 

If you think you can get me back in your arms,

You'll see another man holding me strong.

 

If you think I'll stay there and cry for you to come back,

You'll find me tearing up with laughter, flirting with another.

 

That's is what you get, for not remembering who I am;

I was your equal.

I was your savior.

But now, your rival.

 

Just remember that, if I had you then. I could have ten men better now.

 

© 2010 Flo


Author's Note

Flo
I know, pretty cheesy I guess, but, that is how I feel right now.

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J.M
Love it - very strong and optimistic. And different from a lot of the poetry you find these days.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it, it's different. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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well that told them..strong and powerful message..well penned

Posted 14 Years Ago


That's is what you get, for not remembering who I am;
I was your equal.
I was your savior.
But now, your rival.

Such Amazing words here. This is awesome. I really enjoyed the intensity of this write. Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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