Going with the Flow

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Each time they set you down, You lower your head in fear,

when they try to beat you up, for speaking a fact so clear.

 

Everytime you feel left out from the truth,

whenever they seem to rape you from your youth.

 

Running away always seems best,

but then the guilt will burn your chest.

 

Standing up, without a voice,

Won't give much freedom or some choice.

 

Voices without an echo won't last,

They'll dissappear in this world so vast.

 

Combine the two, and it would do some good,

but there is always an obsticale to ruin your mood.

 

Just think and breathe, and let it go,

Sometimes, you just have to go with the flow.

 

Author's Note

somehow rushed up, written just on the spot, ignore grammar problems and enjoy :)

P.S. :- what do you take from this???

Reviews

[Your Teaship]

This is gorgeous, and very true in all sense of the words. My favorite part(s) being
"Standing up, without a voice,
Won't give much freedom or some choice."

Absolutely excellent! :)

[artsystyle]

wonderful really has meaning

[Undying Glory]

"Standing up, without a voice,
Won't give much freedom or some choice.

Voices without an echo won't last,
They'll dissappear in this world so vast"

love those words. the only qualms i have with this are the slight spelling errors but other than that this is great work

[Tate Morgan]

good idea

[Bexfinch]

Wow I like it . It kind of feels like how i feel right now. I seem to go with the flow of my friends but they don't realize thats how they act and i try and go with the flow and ;augh and respond like them great write