Letting Go

my heart doesnt break anymore <3

Once upon a time, I'd float away in your memories,

I'd be drowning in the last fight,

 

I always thought I'll break my heart again,

Seeing your smiling face.

 

But now, My heart refuses to break,

Now I know, Im letting go.

 

This heart didn't even try to rip apart,

it kept beating, strong and still going on,

 

I'm sad that this feeling has gone from me now,

but happy that I finally let go.

Author's Note

Something fast, but I guess some people might relate, haha, I usualy get too attached sometimes, that i break down, but this time, i didnt break, guess its a nice change.
enjoy and review

P.S. excuse the grammar ^-^''

Reviews

[EmpressPoetess]

outstanding. you said it all, expressed it very well.

[P.S I Love You]

I understand the feeling.. I can tottaly relate to this.. nice work!

[G. Anderson]

I've felt like this many a time. Such works as this are ones to be read aloud over and over, simply for the fact that they're so easily related to.

You have a gift... one that touches people no matter what you do.

~Gage

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice poem with a lot of emotions. Heartfelt, true and something I could relate to. Great!!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

That’s what poetry is all about, writing what one feels,
nice work, well done.

[Theresa]

A piece everyone can relate to. When someone breaks your heart or when you think someone has you can't imagine it ever getting better and then little by little day by day you begin to forget and move on. You realize you are stronger than you evr gave yourself credit for. Your poem captures this completely. I really like the ending it's bittersweet. Nicely done.

[Beatles9322]

Aw! So nice! Very deep and beautiful.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a smooth~cathartic write~ =)~

[loowzerX]

:)

[Angel Veselinov]

It is really nice and showing your emotions nicely. I think sometimes it is better to stop at the beginning rather than suffer at the end and you lost so much time in pain and suffer. :) Keep writing :) I really like your work :)