Belly Dancer

Belly Dancer

A Chapter by Flo
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haha, just read

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 Twist and turn, plunge and jump,tip toe around and smile

move like a graceful wave,your arms like snakes

Snaking around your newest victim in your enchanting spell

Just like a belly dancer, you take their hearts away

Let them stutter and sway, giving them something to remember

Eyes filled with lust following each step, trying to grab your hips

You dip down and slither up again, just like a belly dancer

Making them want more, lettting their hearts go sore,

Such a tease to them, while you have your fun, 

While you twirl and twirl, then dip and swirl

Your air getting higher and higher

Atmosphere of lust, But your not just

entertainment, Your their charmer

Like a belly dancer charming till the end

Of the toxic tune stopping slowly

Your eyes gleaming with pride, your smile wider than wide

Being called names was taken at your stride

Just like a belly dancer



© 2009 Flo


Author's Note

Flo
Very random, ha, probably my worst writing, enjoy!

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I don't think so, this was so lovely and soothing. Never doubt yourself. Even when 'you' doubt yourself on something, that something can be something so great, like this poem for example. You doubted it, but it was great to all your viewer's eyes. Overall great job! ☺
~D♥m♥~

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this is awsome, I sincerely enjoyed every word that created the attitude of flow,
it transported me to another place and time and gave two perspectives at once, sensual, mysterious, rowdy
and easeful and contempt. quite a scope of thought, a truly well executed piece

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this poem full of emotional desires and passions i could see myself sitting in the front row watching every move and being powerfully moved by the seductive temptress,it made me laugh about the snake arm movements i sometimes amuse other people with this and i am a guy,it always raises a smile.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i like this, cute, understanding and overall a good flow. good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is cute, I like this
Wonderfully written

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 10, 2009
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Flo
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