Mortality Wish

How can i not be judge?

how can i ever be forgiven?

i am just done, 

i don't want to keep on living

i want my time to be up, to get out of this life,

for me to give up, stop sinning, 

and give into the knife.

i have had enough, i have lived thru so much.

i am just done here, should i give in to the desire to just give up?

or should i just keep going even though its tough?

they say I'll look back and regret creating these scars, 

but i can't be the only one who thinks that is the future, 

way to far..

i don't plan on making it that long, 

to feel that regret,

i will not know what its like to wish something undone, 

to want them covered, my mortality unmet

Reviews

[acidmonkey]

I agree with your poem 100%, each word is a strike to the heart for me. I am very appreciative of your work.

[Jack Kennedy]

I really love this one. It speaks volumes and seems genuine.

9.0/10

[Aguilar]

Nice I like how you wrote your poem great job I can totally understand