Life Like a Maze

I am working my way thru life like a maze

working thru problems in a devastating haze

i push back those problems, the ones causing fear

and i kill myself inside, 

blood as my tears

I am awake, and i am alive,

but i do not want to be, 

my desires divide.

i am scared of the pain,

but it can't be more than what i feel now,

i need to keep going, i can't let myself down.

keep me soul in memory,

keep me living inside,

keep my thoughts living,

and know that i tried.

Reviews

[acidmonkey]

I love the feeling that brushes through my mind as if the words push through every part of me as i plow through the words sending my brain into an explosion of excitement and wonder from the poem. Thank you.

[Ambra Celeste]

Well Trenton you said you are only 15 and I have to say that you did a good job. At your age I was asked to write a poem for homework and I was not able to write one line, not even one! So well done.

[Jack Kennedy]

Nicely executed and I like how it's structered. Well done!

[Ren Grace]

Very nice poem! I loved the structure.

[Aguilar]

I can totally feel what you mean with your poem great poem by the way