Relationships

I always thought the most perfect relationships 

Were the ones where the lovers are committed,

Even if there were to be a few little trips,

Because on the good days, you would be benefited.

People seem to quit when it stops being fun

Because they think everything should be carefree;

So you just pack up and move on to the next one; 

But I'm truly breaking, don't you see?

Relationships are difficult, you see?

They aren't always happy and mirthful.

Because sometimes there's going to be fallen debris,

That we have to sort out for it to be worthful.

But I still think about our time together, 

And how i really and truly miss it;

Then i remember when in my head there's really bad weather,

That for me, you don't even give a s**t.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i relate to this...i thought marriage was to be forever...apparently not...and i came to think the words shouldn't be "till death do us part"
but "till the first major obstacle"
love and relationships aren't easy...but those who think they should be...are not willing to sift through the bad stuff...they expect non-stop utopia...movie love, but it is real, and real is sometimes tough.
another write that makes us ponder a really important subject.
j.

[Planet x]

Beautiful poem , I love the end