binge

binge

A Poem by Kira
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not sure it qualifies as either a haiku or a senryu, technically.

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crying while i eat

i shove chips into my mouth

empty corridors

© 2011 Kira


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Hemmingway wrote: "For Sale, Baby Shoes, never worn." He considered it a perfect sentence. I put "binge" in the same breath. You'd have to understand the battle to appreciate these three lines...but if you do, then they are brilliant.
Nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago



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A Poem by Kira