somebodygirl

somebodygirl

A Poem by Kira

i am a

button-bursting

stomach-puffing

thighs-bulging

(120 pound)

size 3.

 

i am a

brown-eyed

zit-faced

buck-toothed

(almost average)

ugly girl.

 

i am a

brain-melting

memory-exploding

mind-racing

(retarded)

honors student.

 

i am a

too-quiet

friendless-shadow

hateful-soul

(PMSing, of course)

b***h.

 

i am a

tear-flowing

wrist-slashing

heart-thrumming

(cutter?)

somebodygirl.

© 2011 Kira


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All of your poems are amazing...and this one is totally added to the growing pile! I liked the line breaks; they really add to the intense feeling of the piece (don't know if you meant it to be intense, but it was still intense to me. Not like zombie-slasher-flick intense, but just intense as in uneasy. Unresolved. That sort of thing.) Now I'm rambling. But nice job, once again. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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A Poem by Kira