At Night, Haiku

Insomnia

Watching moonbeams spin

I lay there in the dark night

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I can't go to sleep.

 

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Fifth Place

Jun 15, 2009

• Quick Haiku Anything Contest
• At Night, Haiku

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jenthura]

Once again very sharp outlines. The Japanese truly perfected their arts of simplicity; it reminds of bamboo shadows in moonlight: your poem.

[Stephanie]

That's beautiful! And it gives a great tribute to the wondrous night....great job :]

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem

[Serend1p1ty]

This is so me.
Right now.
It's 1 30 in the morning & I'm up & reading poetry, because this is the best time for me.
I'm alone, alone to my thoughts.
Most peaceful time ever.
Great haiku though, the opening line was great. The way you describe things is really unique, it makes your work great.

Yours truly,
cloud6

[Lyzzy Redd]

This is the exact definition of me trying to get to sleep. xD Great haiku.

[Gossamerwings36]

Very nice.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great Haiku