Missing You (Lyrics)

My oldest song...I must have been 10 when I first put it together.

I pack up my heart, I'm flying solo

I just wish you'd been there to tell me "Please, don't go,"

I'm sorry to leave you, but here on the plane

I know if you'd been there it would just flare the pain...

 

I'm missing you, hope you miss me too, know I never should've gone

I'm missing you, hope you miss me too, the worst thing to be is alone

I'm missing you, what do i do?, we're seperated for good

I'm missing you, but this is true: I wouldn't forget you even if I could

 

(Guy voice)

I'm there at the house, why did she lie?

I just wish I'd been there so I could tell her "goodbye",

I'm broken, I'm bleeding, but there in my mind

I expect to feel angry, but then I find...

 

(Chorus)

 

(Together) I shouldn't have said those things last night,

But this isn't worth one fight...

 

(Chorus x 2, fade out)

 

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2nd! :)

Jun 13, 2009

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Good job! It was pretty good!

Aug 1, 2009

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Reviews

[Serend1p1ty]

A really great write.
The two point of views are really cool & give the song dimension.
The line two lines they sing together was such a clever piece, definitely my favourite pair of lines.
Awesome piece.

Yours truly,
cloud6

[Nicole]

This is really good. I love it. This is most likely the best song I have ever herd of. And, as a suggestion, maby put some gitar, drum, or piano solos so the song doesn't seem so short. Great job! And keep up the good work!

Nicole

[..R.I.P..]

Wow! I loved it! It has an amazing imagery and good rhyme.