Dizzy

Upside down or right side up?

I can no longer be sure.

So I’ll lie across this bed,

And if all the blood rushes to my head,

It will be clear whether or not,

I’m upside up, or right side down.

Author's Note

Another short poem, all comments are helpful. :)

Reviews

[writernubbin]

I'm a fan of nonsense poems--this is too cute (the font made it a little hard for my old eyes to read but I made it through) LOL

[GreenSkeleton16]

awesome!! this poem inspires me

[KAREN]

This is so cute, and catchy! Love it! Short but to the point, can make the reader to stop and think too!