Fantasy

...conquered...

i long for Your touch
i yearn for Your protective embrace
Is it asking too much
To want to see Your desire for me written on Your face

i want to feel Your weight on me
Shiver in blissful ecstasy
As You release into me
You have become my only fantasy

i am no longer a conquest for You to win
Now I sit and watch as others become Your game
Settling for the reality that now You are only a friend
Broken-hearted i know my life will never again be the same

Reviews

[New Theory]

So many unfulfilled dreams in life, yet if every dream was fulfilled would be really be happy?

[kublakhan27]

The dreaded friend zone can be an awfully lonely place at times...I absolutely loved 'i want to feel Your weight on me'...I don't think there could be a better image to relay the conflicting states-of-mind in this piece...great work Phoenix :)

[Lyn Anderson]

The pain of realizing someone who you want as a lover and more is just a friend and nothing more -- very sad.

[Botania]

Aw Flame. There is definitely a game going on at WC, but I hardly believe that passing a compliment is equivalent to conquering. Getting used to someone's compliments to have them truncated and suddenly ripped away... is, well, cruel. Unfortunately cruel people are everywhere. A cautionary tale in a sad poem. Hope this never really happened. Hugs.