For Me

...trail to bliss...

Be ever so careful
what you manifest

Universe stands ready
to put you to the test

My thoughts race
and my body shudders

The very thought of her
makes my heart flutter

My breath catches
in my throat

This path
my attention
I now devote

My body longing
for her touch

Passion causing
my cheeks to blush

I am ready
for this fascinating ride

Building a foundation
and taking my time

Thrilled by how she
puts me in check

For me
she is irresistibly
perfect

Reviews

[s y e]

This is sensual, sweet and passionate. I loved it. This is a feeling that we all wish and hope for... some get it forever and some just a few months/years or even weeks. We can all hope and dream. ;-)

[Chris Micha]

Throw it out to the universe and it shall give it to you. I like that concept, indeed. I thought this was very beautiful and thought provoking. Bravo!

[ron]

Ahh I know this feeling very well. It's wonderfully perfect on so many levels.

[MagicAl]

Really enjoyed this. Liked the fact that the title and description don't give too much away about the content and where the poem will end. Good work.

[Savannah Bly]

I like this one! It is beautiful.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Phoenix, this is a great write! I love it! Love the first four stanzas...
"Be ever so careful
what you manifest

Universe stands ready
to put you to the test

My thoughts race
and my body shudders

The very thought of her
makes my heart flutter"

It has great flow and beauty with just the right amount of intensity. It sounds whimsical and seductive. Very nice write!

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Whoooo hooo hooo
Really really good.
LOVE this one.
Romantic, passionate, free.
A touching and revealing poem.
B. E. A. utiful

[Saddam]

My body longing
for her touch
Passion causing
my cheeks to blush.....

Thi

[Bluefire]

Aaawwe, I like this. It's sweet as an unburnt cookie and lovely as the night sky.
Well done!

[Madalyn Beck]

A sweet and passionate write! Falling in love and desire. Beautiful. (: