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...manifesting...

Seeking an intellectually inspiring angelic being
A spiritually grounded woman who can sing
Someone who will lead and dance with me
Is honest and openly shows vulnerability

I want to be challenged to grow and to learn
For my trust and my love, I want her to yearn
Both Pagan and Christian I need her to be
So she can lovingly discover all of me

Boldly creative with aspiring goals
To her own path I want her to hold
Enlightened and able to humbly forgive
In radical acceptance I want her to live

A lover, a fighter, a vampiric neck biter
Even better if she can pass as a biker
I want a woman who can stand through pain
And no matter the course, as a friend will remain

Yet further still, I want a woman who will
Let me love and hold her through her pain until
Joy and peace fill her soul and her heart
And together down a path collaboratively chosen we start

Reviews

[New Theory]

The last verse is so beautiful, it just took away my breathe, lovely writing dear and I will have to say again the last verse is genius.

Yet further still, I want a woman who will
Let me love and hold her through her pain until
Joy and peace fill her soul and her heart
And together down a path collaboratively chosen we start

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you. The last stanza was written hours after the others--I realized I had something very important left to say--I'm very pleased that it works well :-)

[New Theory]

I think its why it acts a stand alone and attracts attention.

[Bluefire]

I love that bit about the biker. There's something strangely cool about girl bikers.
I like how you worded this, very clever.
Well done. ^^

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

INSPIRATIONAL WRITING.
Beautifully written poetry.

[Saddam]

a work with excellency..... I like it much.....

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you very much :-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, this gave me goosebumps. I never expected it from the title. Well done.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you so much KL!

[ron]

This is beautiful. I hope you get an answer soon. you deserve to have her in your life.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Aw, Ron--what a sweet thing to say!

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow. Beautiful. That last verse was the icing on the cake of love! Great write! (:

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you so much! It took some time to learn what I truly seek~and that last line...yep, that's it! Thank you for your review!

[Bright Ocean Star]

lol....you make me burst out laughing at the most inauspicious times. Thank you for the line 'a lover, a fighter, a vampiric neck biter'. I know you were probably deeply serious, but seeing that in print just made me slip off of my chair! You are a hoot! Great write!

[FlamingPhoenix]

Sounds like you needed that endorphin rush :-). Yeah, I have a weakness for black leather, "witchy" shoes, blue/green eyes, and biting...but that line in particular, had built-in sly humor too--and you took it just right! Thank you for your review!

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you!

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Chris Micha]

If you find her will you let me know and vice versa :)

I thought this was beautifully written. It flowed and rhymed so fluently. Great job! :)

[FlamingPhoenix]

If I have the good fortune to find her~