Do You Know?

...still caring from a distance...

I cannot help but wonder

Do you ever read my writing

Encapsulating my many blunders

Until I gave up trying

 

So many pieces inspired by you

The door to my soul you opened

Would it bring greater offense if you knew

Considering what you have chosen

 

If you read me at all please know that I care

I read you and my heart is breaking

Happiness is not what you have recently shared

Please know that for you I will always be praying

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

An incredibly moving piece...it's hard to find the words to articulate how it truly makes me feel, except to say that I relate to it very much...and even though I've carried these sentiments for many years, I've never been able to convey them with such crystal clarity...excellent work my friend :)

[FlamingPhoenix]

I find it most interesting the pieces of mine that move you. Your positive reviews and kind words mean much more than I could ever convey. My appreciation and esteem for you as a writer who inspires me, makes your reviews that much more meaningful! Thank you :-)

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure my friend :)

[FlamingPhoenix]

Again, another one I recently referenced...thanks again!

[s y e]

Awh, FP, this makes me sad and I want to give you a big huggle... He's definitely missing out if he isn't reading you. Such a heart-wrenching piece.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you for your kind words!

[Chris Micha]

Maybe he is, but if he's not, he's losing out. Very heartwrenching piece but it was so good. Bravo!

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you kindly for your visit and review!

[Lyn Anderson]

This is so sad -- and so heartfelt, and I hope the person who is the subject is reading.

[FlamingPhoenix]

I hope she continues to do what is best for her--whatever that might be.