Not Who I Am

time to walk away--not just from one--but everyone like you...

On this journey of life

I have experienced strife

I have cried many tears

I have overcome many fears

 

I have played many games

I have felt ashamed

I have allowed parts of me to die

Yet I have continued to try

 

Recently I have learned a lot

About what I want and who I am not

I am done short-changing myself and giving myself away

There are just some games I no longer desire to play

 

From this point forward

Those in my life are going to have work toward

Earning my friendship which begins with earning my trust

I am listening to my intuition and leaving you in the dust

 

 

 

Reviews

[s y e]

I've never walked away from anything FP - but I do think it is time for me to do it now, I think we need to know when our time is up and when to leave... And I think it's my turn now. Your poem just backed it all up for me. I loved it and thanks for helping me make my decision.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you! To know that my work inspired you to make a life decision is truly humbling.

[Coyote Poetry]

"I am listening to my intuition and leaving you in the dust"
The above line is necessary sometimes. Some people just abuse and use and we need separation. I like the thoughts leading to the good ending. People can't change. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you! I think people can change--if they want to--but no one can change another. Thank you kindly for your review!

[Madalyn Beck]

This is fantastic. Sometimes, we just have to walk away from those who so easily and carelessly destroy us and our trust. A poem many can relate to. Great job! (:

[FlamingPhoenix]

Walking away has never been something that I do well--I don't like giving up on people, but I've learned that in reality, I have two choices: walk away or lose myself--so, I'm going to have to change the way I approach life.

[Madalyn Beck]

It is tough. I was the same way. But change isn't always a bad thing. Hang in there dear! (:

[Lyn Anderson]

This is brilliant, and I understand completely.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you understand--and I'm glad you think my honest piece is brilliant :-)

[Bright Ocean Star]

I like this so much! Very nice write, Phoenix. I like your independent streak

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you. I'm a very independent person most of the time. I've just been on a roller-coaster ride the past few months--had some learning to do--thankfully I'm a quick-study and ultimately have a very defined sense of self. Thank you for your review.