Rectifier

...just one more step further from shore

Just how deeply do I dare
venture into this ocean
Before I risk drowning
in a sea of emotion
Your eyes capture
my hesitant attention
Gazing into my soul
capturing my dissension
I've debated for days
what game I want to play
And I have decided
to take the journey
day by day
You've asked me why
my attention has turned to you
I believe it's because
I can finally be true
Not once have I worn a mask or
tried to be someone I'm not
You claim the ability
to uncorrupt the corrupted
and I think I'd like to be taught

Reviews

[A. Amos]

this is one of most daring & stylish piece of writing, I have to come back to read more of your work.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you. I always appreciate your reviews!

[Lyn Anderson]

A sophisticated thought process here. Not one to be trifled with, nothing entered into lightly.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you KL--no, nothing to be entered into lightly with this one...I'll enjoy the journey--one step at a time away from shore.