Good Riddance

Good Riddance

A Poem by FlamingPhoenix
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Who needs a fake friend?

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Love me or don't
I refuse to care anymore
About fake friends who won't
Accept me for who I am at the core

Judgment, hypocrisy, and righteous indignation
You are no better than I
And I don't need your holy salvation
Not even a single tear at your departure I cry

I am too busy grieving my broken-heart
And blazing my future path
To worry about your gossip-filled fiery darts
On you, my time would be wasted feeling a shred of wrath

Rather I feel a sense of relief
I can easily choose a few new friends
Remove my masks and freely be
Knowing they see more than my sin

© 2014 FlamingPhoenix


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Enjoyed this one :-) I like the character and flow of this poem. Certainly a genuine piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Good riddance indeed.

From a magnet I once owned;

"Here's to you and here's to me. Best friends we'll always be. And if by chance we disagree; to hell with you and here's to me."

Don't let judgmental idjits get to you.

Great poem by the way. Well written.

-Caradoc

Posted 10 Years Ago


Phoenix, I identify with this so much...you have no idea. I love the emotion and honesty with which you expressed yourself in this poem. It is so powerful. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very heartfelt piece....friends are a dime a dozen...true friends are a rare find.
I love the attitude in this work...great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlamingPhoenix

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for your visit and review!
RichGee

10 Years Ago

My pleasure
"knowing they see more than my sin" -- and he who is without sin should cast the first stone -- yes, there are those out there who love a person for all of them, no matter what the all entails. This is beautifully written, and an emotional write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlamingPhoenix

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your review and your kind words. I'm just so done trying to be someone I'm not and al.. read more
A very heart felt piece. It's always difficult when one is betrayed by a friend you trust. I feel a lot of people who read this will empathize with your words. Clive.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

FlamingPhoenix

10 Years Ago

The one thing I've learned over the past few months is who my friends are and who they are not. I r.. read more
MAD ENGLISHMAN

10 Years Ago

I heartily agree with you. I have a friend who lives in France and I haven't seen him for ten years... read more

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