Bridge to Nowhere

Bridge to Nowhere

A Poem by FlamingPhoenix
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My goodbye

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Goodbye my sweet
I finally did it
It is now complete

It's taken all day
And many a drink

But I finally deleted
All 383 messages
All but 4 that you sent
over 18 days
Our love has been defeated
My hope depleted

And this process I do declare
Nearly brought me to the brink
I can no longer invest my time
Building a bridge to nowhere



© 2014 FlamingPhoenix


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Goodbyes should be short and sweet, as this one was. Very nice, Phoenix! She's a strong woman.

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlamingPhoenix

10 Years Ago

Thank you and yes she is mighty strong!
I enjoyed this. It put me in the place of the speaker and I could really empathize with the feeling. Seems as though the speaker Is no longer in such a place of hurt but has found some resolution. Thanks for a good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


FlamingPhoenix

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your visit and review. I do believe the speaker did find some resolution.

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Added on March 18, 2014
Last Updated on April 23, 2014
Tags: Release, letting go, goodbye

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