A Sad Death.

A Sad Death.

A Poem by Flaming-Blossom
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I just love wolves and basically this is about a wolf who challenged her leader and got pretty much scratched up and bloody and then slowly dies and realizes some things.

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Now bloody and scratched up I'd faced his wrath,

Now i walk alone on this path,

Where it leads to i do not know,

I have no idea of where to go,

I stayed up all night and howled,

Thinking about how angry my leader was with me when I scowled,

As it started to rain a surpressed a shiver,

Then my bloody paws started to quiver,

I hit the muddy forest ground,

The world kept spinning round and round,

I couldn't think nor see,

I thought now i would be free,

But so close to death how could I be?

At first i thought i was going crazy,

Then i realized that now since i was alone i was going to die,

About this i couldn't lie,

I howled loudly once more,

My whole body suddenly felt sore,

Everything went black,

For a split second i thought i broke my back,

But no, It was you who did this to me,

Now i would never be free,

When i couldn't breathe,

This painful place i wished to leave,

That I did,

What a painful life i lived,

All the fights, Brokenhearts, Loneliness,

Now i reaized i was truly a mess,

What a painful death I had,

And knowing how cruel i was to you made me sad,

How i wish i could redo everything i said and did,

Looking back i  realized i was so stupid,

I miss you,

I've always loved you and no matter how many times i said i hated you it wasn't true,

Goodbye, Forever.

 

© 2010 Flaming-Blossom


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Flaming-Blossom
Hope you like it :D

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I do very much like it. Rather sad tale of regret but too late to do anything about it. I like wolves too and enjoyed your wolf tale here. I can believe a wolf might have these sort of thoughts and regrets after such an action was taken.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on September 2, 2010
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