This Is Where I End And You Begin

I made this on my foopets account and i want to post it on here to see what others think :D

 No need for comfort or for light,
I’m lying motionless in the graveyard tonight,
This is where i end,
And you begin,
You’ll take my heart and soul away,
On my fine death day,
I can see how this is gonna end,
Our spirits will bend,
This has been a sad night,
Filled with blood and tears but no light,
This is where i end,
And you begin.

Author's Note

I made this one day and it took a bit to write but I'm proud of what i wrote, Feel free to give your honest opinion on it.