Today I’m 54

Just a silly scribble on my birthday

Today is the day
I turn 54
And the lines I display
Might say somewhat more
And the state of my grey
not as keen as afore
and the step in my sway
gets a little more sore
and the choice on my tray
could be a bit more
and the weight that I weigh
is a dubious score
but it is safe to say
it might be somewhat more
but today is the day
and all of you… I adore
from the fracas and fray
and the bothersome snores
from the sneeze that you spray
the left socks on the floor  
and the things that you say
that leave me wanting for more
for you are the bouquet
that makes life living for

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

I hope your birthday was everything you wanted it to be, Bunny. You are still a young man. I am 16 years older than you. "A little more sore" is a major understatement at my age! Glad you have a special someone who makes life sweet. Lovely write. Lydi**

[Robert Trakofler]

Thanks, Lydia I am blessed with so many loves

[Chris Shaw]

Happy birthday Bunny. Have a wonderful day. After all you have been through it is something to celebrate. 🎂

Have fun

Chris

[Robert Trakofler]

I had a wonderful day!

[Chris Shaw]

Good to hear that Bunny.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Happy birthday 🎂 I loved being 54 and you will too

[Robert Trakofler]

Thank you mon cheri! I'll take what I can get:)