Witness

Witness a poem spoken and written by Robert Trakofler image by author

Witness…

 

Let me drink,

from the sustenance of your heart;

For mine beats,

in resonance of its impart.

And the rate,

of my reverence for its remark;

Is the pulse,

to the poetry of my art.

It is for you;

That the skies part,

and the words flow.

That the lights arc,

on the wave crests glow.

It is for you…

my dashes dart,

on the breezes blow.

And passion marks,

on my penning throws.

It is, for you.

© 2022 Robert Trakofler

Author's Note

Robert · Witness

Reviews

[FGFRANKLIN]

What a wonderful gift you bestow upon your reader with this offering; you give your reader a sense of importance and connection to your work and I think that is a most worthwhile effort. Why else would a poet write? Of course poets cannot do otherwise considering our incurable condition but it certainly endears the reader to the author. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing your uplifting verse.

[Robert Trakofler]

Often people ask me if I have a muse and I always respond "You" They usually just give me "the look" of incredulity and/or a blush and shake their heads:) But my muse has always been the reader and I worship and relish the reader even if my lines only meet one pair of eyes they are everything to me

[Alla Antsis]

Reading your “love song” gives such an uplifting experience as though it was addressed to me solely. Connected to oneself, feeling touched and being reminded of the importance of love. Just beautiful, Robert

[Robert Trakofler]

it is for you:)

[William Michael Reeves]

Every word a beat. Every thought a piece of art framed in letters. Matted with punctuation. It's not often we write for ourselves only. If what needs to be said were only for ourselves we wouldn't be very likely to pen it I imagine. And to write what we know is to write what we've witnessed. I think I see what you're getting at ... we need to write.

[Robert Trakofler]

like a fish needs water:)

[Einstein Noodle]

what a blessed poem ... what a great heart it reveals .. poets bleed, uplift, inspire, have sex all for those who read .. i don't think it can be said more eloquently .. tho of course this may be taken for just one love .. but i think not .. beautiful beautiful expression sir ... your read increases the enjoyment by 10 ;)
E.

[Robert Trakofler]

Hi Einstein:) I do love the reader, some call it a muse, others a person some call it God but I call it my witness or my "audience of one" however LOL it may be all of those things:)

[lightsong]

I had to come here again....

I have always been a Witness, and the Witness word has been always stuck in my head, but lately so much so... Thank You Angel Bunny Robert 🤍

[Robert Trakofler]

oh, how I love my audience of one! I love the witness more than I love myself I think... perhaps that is what love really is. Caring for others more than one self and thriving on it

[Chris Shaw]

It is for you ………..

and how your readers are thankful for the devotion you pay to your own work. All that effort into your poetic lines, so we reap the benefit. Poetry with passion. Dear bunny it is good to read you and I very much hope your health is improving.

Chris

[Robert Trakofler]

I am almost back to my old self dear Chris:) I will not be running any marathons LOL but I am able to work almost at my old pace:) most of my strength is back and I am sitting here conversing with you so I am happy and lucky and filled with greatfulness

[Chris Shaw]

That is so good to hear. Sending a big smile your way :)

[Betty Hermelee]

"It is for you""....a very distinctive poem, it seems that you love this person so much that you are imparting you devotion in so many ways...your poetry flows as an art because of your love for her..."and the wave crests glow".... a very romantic piece and I love it...
Best, B

[Robert Trakofler]

you caught me:) I wrote this referring to the reader I love no one as much as I love the reader the witness the ethereal inquisitor is my romance and for them I would give anything and everything:)

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome Robert!
Best, B

[Kelly Scheppers]

It appears many of us are voicing our praise. How wonderful to read what I aspire to be - a better poet! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving Day, Robert!

[Robert Trakofler]

HI, kelly:) to this day I don't think I am ever satisfied with a poem. Some come close but by the time I finish a thing... the next one is always cooking in my mind LOL

[andrew mitchell]

Excellent write Robert, damn good stuff in true poetic style.

[Robert Trakofler]

thanks Andrew:)

[AYVID N]

A truley poetic expression of devotion and love.
This poem is so classic in its feel. Leaves a lasting touch on me.

And the rate,
of my reverence for its remark;
Is the pulse,
to the poetry of my art.

*Sigh*...My dear friend Bunny...teach me how to write like this...

[Robert Trakofler]

Oh but you do my dear Divy:) you drink from the same well... we all just scrawl our hearts out:)

[AYVID N]

Oh how we scrawl...I'm glad we are bound by the written word... :)

I hope you're having a fabulous day.