Rag Doll

Rag Doll

A Poem by Fish

See you quake in your boots,
so sick,
can't resist,
Everything wrong,
everything sick
too irresistable,
something's wrong in my head,
something of desire,
a dirty little need,
get down on my knees
I got no problem, 
I will plead.
Take me,
take me anyway you wish 
take me fast- take me strong 
take me till I'm black and blue. 
I swear to you, 
there's something wrong with me, 
I'm broken rag doll.
 I've been sewn up, time and time again, 
tearing at my seems --begging to played with,
 please just one more time, 

I'm nothing but a broken rag doll, 
pulling at the seems,
 crying out with my dirty little needs, 
I'm nothing but some cloth strung together, 
waiting to be broken, 
expecting harsh wounds. 

I'm not a porcelain doll,
 don't think I ever was, 
I was born in the mud, 
broken in the corner,
 sewn up by your lies, 
stitched closely by these wounds. 
I'll tell you time and time again,
 I'm nothing but a broken rag doll,
 pulling at the seems, crying out with my dirty little needs.
Sick little wretch, 
who pretends to be so good,
a sick little monster
who begs to be flesh and bone,
I'm nothing but a doll,
forgotten in the memories,
broken and fixed
far too many times
that things are starting to get loose.
Do you understand my need,
I see you stare across the room,
you quake in your boots,
I know you see a sick little monster,
and that's what I see, staring back.

© 2013 Fish


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The first verse was fantastic, the rhythm building up to an amazing crescendo. Then I got a bit lost.
Even sick little monsters can get better!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Interesting read. A dark pleading for abuse. A cycle repeated. Twisted. Very interesting. I would write more but I figgin exhausted. Still keep up the writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow...nice one.......

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was moving. Very well written. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Fish

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! ^.^
Issac Scott

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. c:

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Fish
Fish

Grass Valley, CA



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