Stronger

Stronger

A Poem by Fish
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You know when you have a song stuck in your head? except you only know one line? I had a terrible case of that with Kelly Clarkson's STRONGER, I heard it in a car commercial so all I knew was one line

"
"What doesn't kill you makes you stronger"
live a little longer
repeating that one line here
going crazy
back off now
I'm going to freak out now
nothing but that line here
Replicating
never stopping
now it's just the tune
singing the exact
same simple notes played over
going crazy
never stopping.

Watch me fall
see now I'm breaking
shattered pieces
always dancing
to the tune
0:42-0:46
81 now 62
dancing in my head
slowly whispering
beating like a drum
getting louder till' I howl
louder till' my ears crack and scream
now it's just the tune
singing the exact
same simple notes played over
going crazy
never stopping
if I wait-
If I live a little longer
"what doesn't kill you makes you stronger"
repeating that one line here
never stopping
so back off now
I'm going to freak out now
watch me fall
see now I'm breaking
shattered pieces always dancing
to the tune
that one line
that same simple note
0:42-0:46
never stopping
    dancing in my head
never stopping
    slowly whispering
never stopping
    beating like a drum
never stopping
    never stopping till' I break. 

© 2013 Fish


Author's Note

Fish
I heard a car commercial a few months back, only heard it once, with kelly clarkson singing her song STRONGER, I only just now looked up the song to see that the part that was stuck in my head repeatedly is only 0:42-0:46... such a small amount but the tune was catchy and I couldn't get it out of my head! I'm not even exactly sure who Kelly Clarkson is besides the fact that she sings. *facepalm
so yeah, this was spawned from an A.D.D. Math class of me trying not to sing that one line out loud.

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This is awesome, like a spout off of words and emotions!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ahh this for me is so trance like, so stuck in the moment, miniscule in time and space. The jerky yet somehow never ending smoothness reminds me of an epileptic fit! I really like it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


such an emotional read here, powerful imagery.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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