Concrete Jungle

Concrete Jungle

A Poem by Fish

Focused on the concrete jungle and cyberworld.

OPEN YOUR EYES.

Stop, Dance in the rain

Soak up the sun,

Climb a tree,

Swim with the fish,

One with Nature.

At home in the original jungle, before being torn back to the concrete world, of Artificial looks, war, crime, abuse, prejudice, love, tears, smiles, pollution, charity,  riots, drugs, support.

Mixed together in a mess called society,

Destroying forests, fields etc for what, a shopping mall?

Don't forget.

The world is not our servant, but we are a servant of the world,

© 2012 Fish


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I'm not sure i understand.
For it is almost impossible to swim with the fish or climb a tree in a concrete jungle.
There are only buildings and lamposts....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Fish

11 Years Ago

I'm saying that we are too obsessed with our concrete world that we never, say, go to a park. Go cam.. read more
KillerWithWords

11 Years Ago

Understood. Beautiful idea.
Fish

11 Years Ago

Thank you :P

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Added on December 23, 2012
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Fish
Fish

Grass Valley, CA



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