Sick and Twisted.......(Bowie inspired)

Yet another poem inspired by David Bowie

Sick, Sick,

Sick and Twisted

syringe make me uplifted.

Bone, Bone

and a layer of skin-

Lord I wish I was that thin.

Hair.

Shedding.

Stare,

Beheading,

Cynical insults

ignorant little pricks

fighting each other with sticks

throw more stones

take out more loans

shout profanity

with such tremendous calamity

watch me care

about everyone else but you

Bake your lack of heart in a regurgitated stew.

My judgement is gone,

but not for long.

My heart beats fast,

An effect that doesn't last

Syringe Syringe

I disappear bit-by-bit

Syringe Syringe

I'm sick and twisted

Syringe Syringe

I want it, I need it

Syringe Syringe

I'm gone, I'm gone. 

Reviews

[CureThePoison]

I really loved the flow of the poem. Its easy to read, and it has a certain rhythm to it. Its all I could say really xD awesome :3

[Fish]

thank you! ^_^

[MissJenaBlair]

Whoa. This was so awesome to read. I'm being completely honest when I say that you're writing style is so unique and I love it. I think it's so cool how each writer has their own style. Thanks for publishing this. I really enjoyed it, and I look forward to reading more! :)

[Fish]

Awh thank you :D :D I hope you enjoy the rest of my writing as much as this ^_^

[Patrick Henry]

This would be the first time I would ever try my hand at singing the word: syringe!! lol This poem has that sporadic craziness and podium poundings with sharp lines, that I'm surprised there are no comments yet. It's fun to read..... love your Youtube vids!! xoxo -Mark

[Fish]

Wow thank you so much! ^_^ I'm glad you liked them :3 I need a better microphone, then I'll be posting REAL short films instead of class assignments.. XD

[Patrick Henry]

I can't believe you replied!! lol I am actually....a......"fan"!! Sssshhhh!! : ) I don't believe in Slenderman, for having seen REAL horror in my life, but you are a freakin' joy to read, watch, and listen to!! I would love to walk up to a stranger on the street, and slowly read this poem to them, and enjoy that expression of "learning something" and having the same trip through your words that "I" experience. You are adorable!! xoxo -Mark

[Fish]

:3 oh my worrdd thank you sooo much :D :D ^_^ That just makes me so happy, you have no idea,-I'm sitting here smiling like a complete crazy person XD Though I'm sure if you went up to a stranger and said "Sick Sick Sick-and-twisted" their reaction might be a little apprehensive XD ahh thank you so much XD You're so nice :3

[Patrick Henry]

I could clap!! Maybe if I clapped, it would diffuse any feelings of nervousness. : ) I would look like that little monkey from the movie "Monkey Shines"!! lol I really like you, so it would be done with good intentions and with respect!! I was smiling like that "crazy person" some 11 hours ago because of you. : ) You're welcome!! You're beautiful and a lot of fun to read....... xoxo -Mark

[Fish]

XD haha I'm picturing that in my head... oh looorrdd. XD awh, thank you so much you're just.. freaking.. supercalafragilistic-expialadocious!! :) I also love your work, I haven't had much time to see it all yet but the few I did see were incredible :)

[Patrick Henry]

Two of my friends, I thought, were going to do a "Cinquain Tag" with me, but they didn't even start after a week's time of chatting about it. Would you like to do it with me? I could explain more about it in private, and when you are ready, we could do it together. It goes back and forth. The rules are easy and make it fun for both of us!! So, do you want to do it with me? If you read my poems, they are in alphabetical order Y-A, and there are like 220 of them. : ) xoxo -Mark

[Fish]

Uhm, maybe? I have no idea what a Cinquain Tag is :P