Loving a Lie

Trusting the wrong person.

Pain can be a subtle touch with without a conscience we miss so much. To wake each day with lies for thought. To pretend to be the one your not. When you love someone with all your heart, the lie they live tears you apart. Piece by piece ones heart falls to the floor. Loves dying screams forever ignored. Contently slighted humiliated and shamed. The trust of demons ignites hates flame. Forever determined to find loves truth. Your love held closest betrays only you!

Reviews

[Rachael Lea]

this is absolutely amazing... I think my favorite of yours. It provokes feelings that I think almost anyone can relate to.
"To wake each day with lies for thought" I have never thought to word anything in such a way but it is exactly the wording I have always been looking for, very deep.
"To pretend to be the one your not" The mask we all put up the one that hardly comes down. The one that should not be worn with your loved ones and BAM we go on with your poem to the next line
"When you love someone with all your heart, the lie they live tears you apart"
This is PERFECT!!!!! and you just keep going and going with every line painting a picture, creating a feeling just a provoking as music. This is art! Very well done! BRAVO!

[Crimson Apples]

*applause*
Smoothly written, easy rhymes, expressing pain, and what was love.
Yas, I am totally pretending I know what you're trying to say.... But it was a wonderful read :)

[Fireyphoenix]

Thank-you so much for the kind words! I've always dabbled with poems and writing. However it sometimes takes a painful experience to draw the mighty pen! LOL. Thank you again!!!

[Crimson Apples]

lol.
No problem =)

[JetMardium]

Truth spoken from within
a heart scorned thst can understand
love and pain
the two are hand in hand


good job i liked it, felt the pain and the love that made it

[Fireyphoenix]

Thank you so much! I my been so long since I've written anything! I think I've been storing it all up for a time like now! I like writing, it helps the heart!

[JetMardium]

amen to that