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A Poem by Fires Cool Touch

Our Crimson flame is burning bright,

 letting our love take flight.

 

Your beauty is like none other,

Your a wounderful sight.

 

Your love is unmatched by any other,

it is undieing and truethful.

 

 

© 2010 Fires Cool Touch


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Neh I love it. Short but sweet and I think it means a lot to some one out there if you just put the words together and they seemed to work and sound nice or you are really in love in that way. I love it well done Fires Cool Touch and thank you so very much for sharing this most lovely poem with the reseed of us I really do like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on April 14, 2010
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Fires Cool Touch
Fires Cool Touch

Twin Falls, ID



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Hey well, i have been writing since I was 12. Im 18 now. The name is Duel. And I dont really have alot to say about myself so Ill just let my Poetry do the talking. more..

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