Chains

Chains

A Poem by Andrea
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Held down by everything besides addiction

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Chains held me down and I became constricted.
I began suffocating until I gave in.
Temptation drew me to my first drink.
Rather than temptation, it was more of my pain.
I couldn't escape the prison I was in.
I tried to remove myself to be restrained.
Instead, I was locked out of my own heart.
I tried to find the key that was thrown into a jar.
I put it in the trash somewhere under intoxication.
The poison on my breath slipped through my lips.
I told the truth that was buried deep down inside.
This was the part that I just couldn't hide.
The rusted metal clasped my wrists.
The pain was unbearable, I couldn't take much more.
I clenched my hands to turn them into fists.
The feeling of being alive was slipping through my bones.
One by one, I felt myself breaking.
Anxiety overwhelmed my unsettling heart.
The convulsions arose so I started shaking.
I was high off of being drunk.
I didn't have to feel my veins.
I was losing myself to addiction.
Then suddenly, I had felt a change.
I was able to break free.. from these rusted chains.

© 2014 Andrea


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This is very touching and emotional writing, I felt every sense you describe in your words. Amazing piece of work my friend and keep on writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Andrea

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading! I am glad you follow my work, I hope other people feel the same :D
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

you're most welcome

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Andrea
Andrea

Lincoln, NE



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