Enough!!

What went through your mind when you were being intimate with me, but you knew that you would be dropping me like I was the anti christ? Did you just say the things you knew I'd want to hear? Did you just close your eyes & imagine I was her? When you comforted me as I cried, & whispered those reassuring words of your love, was that painful for you? Did you feel anything in those moments? Or did you only tolerate it, as a means to an end? How could anybody be so inhumane? Knowing my silent fears, knowing that I had always held out hope for just a taste of normalcy.. What kind of monster exploits the hopes & fears of another human being? I would walk through hell & back for some answers from you.. Just the way you always said that you would do the same for me, if we could be together.. If only you had been as ridiculously transparent as I was.. What a shameful, heart wrenching lesson you taught me..

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Seems to describe a real moment... in this verse... a rant yet... a dignified one... in the words... the reader in taken in quite well from the beginning... and just carries one to the end lines of the whole piece... Interestingly is the language you portray... just gives the added edge of reality...

[Tate Morgan]

Well sadly we find usery to be a way of life for some .Sorry to hear this happened to you

[zainul]

Your heart expressed eloquently in this poem.
Enjoyed reading.

[Sami Khalil]

"What kind of monster exploits the hopes & fears of another human being? I would walk through hell & back for some answers from you.. Just the way you always said that you would do the same for me, if we could be together.. If only you had been as ridiculously transparent as I was.. What a shameful, heart wrenching lesson you taught me.."
I felt the pain and hurt in this great write. You ask pertinent questions...:)