Who are you? After five long years, I thought I knew even the dustiest corners of your heart.. You knew every curve of my body, every desire of my heart, & every fear that threatened to suffocate me.. Ironically, you also knew my level of loyalty for you, my boundless devotion, my undying support.. Is that why you called on me when your world fell apart? You must have known my love was strong enough to nurse you back to health.. But, how could I have foreseen that once you gained some strength, that I would be abandoned & tossed away like a piece of filthy trash? I don't know who you are.. You can't be the man I once fell in love with.. Please, don't make me look like a fool for loving you..
"I knew even the dustiest corners of your heart.. You knew every curve of my body, every desire of my heart, & every fear that threatened to suffocate me.. Ironically, you also knew my level of loyalty for you, my boundless devotion, my undying support.."
Who are you ? A very poignant question and one that needs to be answered in time. For once we know the truth about others it will change a lot of things . And it will set us fre...Well done ...Bravo
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much.. I'm afraid I'll never get the truthiI'm looking for, or the answers I need.. I j.. read moreThank you so much.. I'm afraid I'll never get the truthiI'm looking for, or the answers I need.. I just have to trust that time heals..
"I knew even the dustiest corners of your heart.. You knew every curve of my body, every desire of my heart, & every fear that threatened to suffocate me.. Ironically, you also knew my level of loyalty for you, my boundless devotion, my undying support.."
Who are you ? A very poignant question and one that needs to be answered in time. For once we know the truth about others it will change a lot of things . And it will set us fre...Well done ...Bravo
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much.. I'm afraid I'll never get the truthiI'm looking for, or the answers I need.. I j.. read moreThank you so much.. I'm afraid I'll never get the truthiI'm looking for, or the answers I need.. I just have to trust that time heals..
The folly... the twist and turns of this verse... Raw emotions... give and take... all the way to the end lines... there must be a balance... and yet none can be found... only to regret the whole mess each time and know when to move on...
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much.. One day, I hope to find some balance, that is one thing I know for sure..
I don't really think of myself as a writer, or a poet, I've just stuffed away all the pain I've experienced over the course of my life, & lately, I've become aware that after an entire life of hiding .. more..