Forever Gone

Gone. Forever gone.

She said those words...

they broke both of them to the core.

 

She said the words,

The both felt the same pain.

But now its over.

 

A simply miscommunication

destroys the ties of love

forever over.

 

Go back to friends,

How is that ever possible.

She just doesn't see.

 

After all the love,

then all the pain,

No. Its forever over.

 

A week from hell with no respite from pain

The demons chant in her ears

everyday..."Its over.. he's gone"

 

She cannot deal anymore,

Why does it matter?

He is forever gone--and its all her fault.

 

The pain still haunts her

she cries herself to sleep

not knowing how to deal.

 

But there is a light

somewhere God gives hope

maybe its not really forever gone.

 

He actually smiled today

He didn't just look away,

Maybe its not forever gone.

 

The throws of young love,

always full of ups and down,

learning how to live.

 

He's really not forever gone,

not now at least

She's in his arms again.

 

But what happens

if he truly is

forever gone.

 

Reviews

[Arsenic]

I have no words....pain so deep. The flow is immaculate, the reader wants to cry, feeling the complete and utter hopelessness. How could he do this? How could Jasper do this?

Arsenic

[Life Shall Cease]

this poem really wants to make the most complex of man cry...
the reader can linger on the lasting image created by you.
intensity is one thing, however the flow helps connect your painfully beautiful words.

great right, absolutely amazing.

[Last Lying Look]

This is an amazing piece.
I'm listening to decode by paramore while reading this and it was so intense.
I love the whole concept here.
Great work!
-E.M.R