The Lost Soul

A personal poem

Darkened eyes, Blackened soul

How could I have lost control

Forgetting all that I've been told

Dying from this Demons hold

Losing hope, gone so low

Watching as my freedom goes

Time to see the Devils show

Hell awaits, Death in tow

It's time to die, my body cries

My eyes can't see whats crucified

I hear a voice, a child's cry

I look up, can't believe my eyes

As I look into the face of who I used to be

Images of all that I used to see

All the things that had made me bleed

All the things that will never be free

Watch it burn, as I turn

I see a chest, and a broken urn

The life once lived, and all i did

The laughters I had as a young kid

Finally lay dorment, forever hid

Break free from these chains

Now that the demons been slain

But I'll never be free when my soul is still stained

Reviews

[Devi DM]

Wow this was dark but really meaningful. You can really feel these words coming out and coming alive. It's relatable to so many souls in different ways. That's what's nice about this. The fact that it can relate to anyone who has been in any dark and challenging situation in life. Nice one, i really liked it.

[Lluvs]

Wow... this is a really powerful poem. I can relate to this poem so much and I can't explain why. Amazing💙