Broken Home

 

No matter I do, or what I say

These thoughts in my head wont go away.

I try to write to get it out.

No matter what I do I'm full of doubt.

 

I walk by myself but never alone,

This house is just a broken home.

I know in my heart that in this life,

Theres more that just unending strife.

 

I want to see life in a whole new way.

I know tomorrow is another day.

Another day to try and fail.

No more nights, so scared and frail.

 

I no longer need that perfect romance.

All I need is a second chance.

A chance to make this life my own.

A chance to mend this broken home.

 

 

Reviews

[Yasmin]

Beautiful poem. simple yet meaningful. Good job on the rhyme.

I want to see life in a whole new way.
I know tomorrow is another day.
Another day to try and fail.
No more nights, so scared and frail.
My favorite :)

Never give up.You will have a chance so once you have it make sure you don't waist it.

[TaiPie]

Wow! This is... Stunning! I love the rhyming scheme, it flows wonderfully. Stanza #1 and 2 really sticks out to me, maybe because I seem to be feeling a little bit like this. This poem seems to reflect the inspiration of never giving up and never loosing hope. I can't say WOW enough!

[Felicity Winter]

This has great meaning that mostly all of us can relate to from time to time. Life can be very difficult but we shouldn't give up.

[Lylith Moonflower]

This was a very heartfelt poem. Sometimes what we have and what we need does not always line up. I hope you can find what you need. I like the last line as well. You wrote this really well.

[Solitaire-P0ette]

Life gets tough on us...seems as if everything shatters before us and we're left with tiny pieces. Everything seems impossible to put back together....but you should never leave hope...give yourself a chance to do right...make piece within yourself.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a heart breaking poem. I makes the reader want to tear through the clouds and let the sunshine pour in.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to find good in confusion. When things are going wrong. Hard to change the direction. Sometime stopping and re-setting a life can help. I like the feel and desire to succeed. A second chance is what most of us need to find the right place to be. A powerful poem with a lot of sadness and some hope at the end. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I walk by myself but never alone

that line really accentuates the pain and loneliness of this poem... overall a very powerful piece of writing.