Topaz Eyes

One of me darker poems. It deals with an issue that I find to be all too common. I hope by reading this some girls will stop and think.

Topaz Eyes

 

 

Your heart breaks,

Your dreams, at stake.

Your love is gone.

Will this pain go on?

 

I see him love her.

Its just like we were.

She laughs, he smiles.

They'll be like this for only a while.

 

He'll take all she has,

His eyes, a seductive topaz.

And she will oblige.

Then he'll cast her aside.

 

He'd do the same to me.

If behind those eyes, I could not see.

Her heart will break.

I hope she learns from this mistake.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Dont trust a boy who asks you for sex. You WILL regret it if you oblige.

Reviews

[GioVonnie]

Awesome Poem, I'm glad I read this, I wrote a poem called "How I Found Her" and this seems like the female version of it... lol... Good Work Though.. I enjoyed reading this..

[Felicity Winter]

I totally agree with you, if someone really loves you they will wait.

[Randall Andrews]

Good poem, there is a lot of depth to that poem, you use the rhyme very well and it could easily be turned into a song. Keep it up.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are wise. When we give in for no purpose. It is just a game and sometime we can be hurt by poor decisions. A young person with wisdom know love is slow and easy. No rush for the things that are precious in a life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There are too many guys out there praying on ladies to fill there animal craving and more unfortunate too many ladies that fall for it... a wonderful flow and rhyming scheme.