What Will Fill This Empty Space?

 

 

My life feels as blank as this empty page.

It feels like im standing alone on a stage.

I look to the crowd for a familiar face,

All I see is this empty space.

 

As I continue to write the page isnt as dull.

I wonder if it will ever be full.

As I walk down an empty road,

I slip into a lifeless mode.

 

What I want is just behind that glass,

I pray it wont fade into the past.

I wont give up without taking a chance,

Will we ever have a perfect romance?

 

Life will get better, or so I'm told.

I wish I had a hand to hold.

Life is beautiful, or so it seems.

The beauty I see is only in my dreams.

Author's Note

I dont really know what to say about this one except enjoy!!

Reviews

[Ellen Hammond]

I like the rhyme and flow of this poem and I can really relate to it. Sometimes that glass is pretty thick cause I am still looking through it. lol

Since I have been away for months, I can only hope you have found a hand to hold at least for now.

[Eric Cox]

I like this a lot. Great imagery and rhyming. Life is lonely until we meet someone. Nicely done.

[Star Wolf]

To feel alone, empty and not so sure you even exist, an awful way to feel. Capturing these emotions and feelings in your poem in such a beautiful way is very impressive. I think you did a great job on this.

[An owl on the moon]

This is so beautifully bittersweet, and much enjoyed! There is the sadness of the longing.. wanting more.. and the hope that what is seen in dreams will one day be realized. Wonderful!

[Chelsea.]

Nice write. The rhyming here works quite well. I guess we just all have to wait and see if the beauty will extract itself from out dreams.

[Lilly]

Nice work with this. A clear poem and nice rhyme sequence
Great work :)

[Samantha Young]

Great Job. I can definitely see the hidden emotion from the poem. Awesome! XD

[Jack]

It was a really smooth/simple read yet the feelings being portrayed are not so simple/smooth. Also a lot of poems that have this rhyming scheme the rhymes seem forced or contrived but in this poem it seemed pretty natural. Nice work.

[Michael X]

Really nice job on the rhyme scheme, and clarity. i think the messege spoke clearly and with a sense of imagery that transports the reader to the moment.
awsome job, keep it up!