See What I See.

        See What I see.

 

 

I see the moon,

    I see the stars.

        I see the gloom,

            I see the scars.

            I see the sun,

        I see the sky.

    I see the guns,

I see the lies.

I see the pain,

    I see the pride.

        I see the strain,

            I see who died.

            I see the love,

        I see the hate.

    I see them shove.

I see their state.

 

 

        See what I see.

Author's Note

Well this was just me randomly rhyming. I got bored and this is what I came up with, Enjoy :D

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

We need to see everything. But we can't allow the B.S to take from our life and spirit. A lot more good in this world then bad. We hear of the bad things. Not the good deeds of many who help the poor and the disability daily. A powerful poem. You made me think.
Coyote

[Liz Alexander]

Good job!

Not bad for being bored.

[An owl on the moon]

Filled with light and darkness, your poem moves us across vibrant feelings and actions of life. I love the feel and flow of this one!

[Keevan]

i like this. it actually goes with what i'm feeling right now. beautiful poem.

[Lilly]

This is a very nice poem with quite powerful words showing the darker things that are present among the beauty of the world. The format of this piece is interesting too.

Great work here :)