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You have to fight, fight for you right.

Your right to be you, and all that you do.

 

Your right to take flight.

Your right to dream and say what you mean.

 

Dont be afriad to say what you mean or dream what you dream.

Your life is your own

Although you're never alone.

 

Take a chance,

Have a beautiful romance.

Make it last,

but dont give up if you crash.

 

Love every minute.

Dont give up and quit it.

 

Life's to short for crying,

Dont whine, just get up and shine.

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy. I just had an urge to write and this is what i came up with, it took me like two minutes to write.
-Edit- When I first uploaded this the last line was, 'Dont whine, just get up and try.' But as I was looking at it I thought...Wow....why didnt I think of putting shine there?? It works just as well plus it rymes much better. Lolz...I'm kinda ditzy. Hope you like it!!

Reviews

[Liz Alexander]

"Take a chance,
Have a beautiful romance.
Make it last,
but dont give up if you crash."

Alot more people should read this. Its wakes up my heart. I have been hugging the beam in my life and not going out and geting what I want.

Thank you for inspiring me. I love this poem! Thank you

Great poem, inspiration is what we all need. Great Job!

[Chelsea.]

Nice job. Honest. I wouldnt say that life is too short, just that sometimes it passes by a bit more quickly than we all like. You should go out and aspire to do things you want, and not be afraid. [:

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right again. Life is short. I'm 51 years old and wish for more time still to chase my grandchildren around. We need to stay positive. We shall have many bumps in the roads. In the end we will cherish the crazy deeds in a life. A excellent poem.
. Coyote

[Lilly]

I have to agree with 'The Rock And Roll Cowboy' - this is a very uplifting message! The flow and rhyme of this piece is great too. I did notice some small errors - 'Dont' should be 'Don't', 'afriad' should be 'afraid' - but these are obviously just typos - and I only notice because I'm editing things at the moment...

great poem - love it :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very smooth floe and very uplifting message... I truly enjoyed this.

[Bobby_94]

Pretty good. You've got alot of talent with this.