What's a Girl To Do?

What's a Girl To Do?

A Poem by FireFly15

What do you do when someone loves you when you cant love them back?

 

How do you let them know that they're not the one for you without hurting them?

How do you get them to let go?

What's a girl to do?

 

When you care about this person and think they are a great friend but they wont let go...

What do you do?

 

How are you going to continue the friendship?

How do you remove the awkwardness?

What's a girl to do...?

 

 

I'm sorry, I don't have an answer to these questions,

I'm still trying to figure it out myself.

 

 

What's a girl to do?

 

 

© 2009 FireFly15


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You ket them love you, sounds timid I know but you can't make them stop. Sooner or later they will stop when they see you dn't have the same feelings. They will find out you just want to be friends and they will accept it or they will move on. If they move on i guess they weren't the right person to begin with, It may hurt but who said love was pain less.


Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Wow

Posted 14 Years Ago


Too many thoughts and opinions on this to post. Message me if you like.
A great write. Expressions of what most of us with feelings go through at least once in our lives.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I understand this. Im currently going through this situation actually, heh. I dont think there is a way around hurting them..
you just have to tell them how you feel the nicest way possible.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dear Writer,

Venting is a very powerful way to express our inner most desires to our writer; sometimes it's the only way to be free from our emotions. Love is a curious being that brings us happiness yet harvests sorrow.

Don't take it the wrong way: but I believe you can structure your rant a bit better so it doesn't look like the essay on some newspaper. I can send you a message showing how to structure a free verse poem / rant to make it more "eye appealing" if you want. Okay. Other than that, I really did enjoy this piece. I like how you asked so many questions to the reader and then even showed that it was your intention to ask the questions in the next-to-last stanza.

Keep writing. The world wants to crucify you because they love to spite you. So keep happy too. :P 9.6/10.

A friend and a writer,
S. W. Scaggs

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is a hard situation to be in. Sometime a calm conversation and hope to maintain friendship. Hurt takes time to heal. A will written poem with many good questions that are hard to find answer for. Except by falling into the problem. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If you do find the answers let me know- I know this feeling - it can be a little awkward and confusing...

great piece - you have conveyed this emotion/ situation well

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You ket them love you, sounds timid I know but you can't make them stop. Sooner or later they will stop when they see you dn't have the same feelings. They will find out you just want to be friends and they will accept it or they will move on. If they move on i guess they weren't the right person to begin with, It may hurt but who said love was pain less.


Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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FireFly15
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Originally my poems were meant to be inspirational. Althought, as of late they have become more of a venting outlet. I think I need to sort out some problems of my own before I can help others with th.. more..

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